outline for staying organized:
1 Get some folders
2 Take some time to clean
3 Get rid of paper you don't need
4 find some stratagies to help stay organizied
At school it is very hard to stay organzied because we only get two minutes to get to class and it is hard to put all of my books neatly in my locker. The lockers are to small, and we have to many books. I have an organization problem.
Because I am unorganized, I keep on losing my papers, have half of my books with ripped covers, have missing assignments and am not prepared for class. In spanish sometimes, I can't find my homework because it is lost somewher in my locker this causes me to have a missing assignment, One of my solutions for being unorganized is getting some folders so I can keep my loose papers together and organized. When I need a paper, I can get it out of my folder without turning my locker upside down, finding it ripped or crumpled. I would keep these folders in my locker, they would be multi - colored so I could tell what folder is for what class.
Another solution I have is I could get rid of papers I don't need, that way, I don't have unnecessary papers taking up space in my locker. Some papers I have are from first and second quarter. If I get rid of those papers, it will give me more room in my locker and my folders. I won't have to worry about grabbing a papaer from the past semester instead of my assignment. I could also focus on bringing only the necessary items to class like books, paper and something to write with and not special markers, colored pencils and toys.
know i just need to apply my solutions to my daily lifestyle and i should be pretty organized.
You have a good start, Roman.
Ideas 4 Your problem is clearly expressed at the beginning and throughout your development, but then not mentioned in the conclusion. Why
not?
Organization 3 - Good until the conclusion - it doesn't exist!
Word Choice 5
Voice 4 You have some good descriptions, but how about using stronger, more exact verbs?
Fluency 4
Conventions 4 A couple of spelling/capitalization problems
Problem-Solution Essay
School Play Test
outline for staying organized:
1 Get some folders
2 Take some time to clean
3 Get rid of paper you don't need
4 find some stratagies to help stay organizied
At school it is very hard to stay organzied because we only get two minutes to get to class and it is hard to put all of my books neatly in my locker. The lockers are to small, and we have to many books. I have an organization problem.
Because I am unorganized, I keep on losing my papers, have half of my books with ripped covers, have missing assignments and
am not prepared for class. In spanish sometimes, I can't find my homework because it is lost somewher in my locker this causes me to have a missing assignment,
One of my solutions for being unorganized is getting some folders so I can keep my loose papers together and organized. When I need a paper, I can get it out of my folder without turning my locker upside down, finding it ripped or crumpled. I would keep these folders in my locker, they would be multi - colored so I could tell what folder is for what class.
Another solution I have is I could get rid of papers I don't need, that way, I don't have unnecessary papers taking up space in my locker. Some papers I have are from first and second quarter. If I get rid of those papers, it will give me more room in my locker and my folders. I won't have to worry about grabbing a papaer from the past semester instead of my assignment. I could also focus on bringing only the necessary items to class like books, paper and something to write with and not special markers, colored pencils and toys.
know i just need to apply my solutions to my daily lifestyle and i should be pretty organized.
You have a good start, Roman.
Ideas 4 Your problem is clearly expressed at the beginning and throughout your development, but then not mentioned in the conclusion. Why
not?
Organization 3 - Good until the conclusion - it doesn't exist!
Word Choice 5
Voice 4 You have some good descriptions, but how about using stronger, more exact verbs?
Fluency 4
Conventions 4 A couple of spelling/capitalization problems
Total points = B